late night thunder
scarier than ghosts –
get to bed quick!
cradle of pillows
blankets like warm arms
Is it a haiku, with an addition to make it a renga? Or is it a tanka? All written by one person (me) so it must be a tanka – only they don't usually have a space before the last two lines. That makes it like a renga – only they are usually written by more than one person. Maybe it's all – or none – of the above?
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