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Having been immersed in memoir writing for many months, I decided to write a small poem every day for a year to keep my poetic hand in. I've posted them to Instagram and facebook as written – where, to my amazement, people love them – but on this blog they are sometimes subject to later rewriting.
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Monday 20 March 2023

My brother hits 'Love" ...

My brother hits ‘Love’

on my facebook post of boats.

We’ve not lost our taste

for messing about in them

as in our teens, 

with Mum along too,

and our good stepfather

making it all happen.


















(Though in our teens it wasn't sailboats but a little motorised runabaout.)



Looking for something to share with Poets and Storytellers United at 

Friday Writings #68: Light as a Feather, I settle on this.

 





 

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1 comment:

  1. Rosemary Nissen-Wade20 June 2023 at 00:05

    Comments transferred from the blog where this was previously posted:

    dsnake1March 21, 2023 at 12:29 AM

    Memories like these will usually not be forgotten. :)
    Reply
    RommyMarch 21, 2023 at 8:25 AM

    That sounds like a lovely time! It is nice that you have those good memories together.
    Reply
    RajaniMarch 21, 2023 at 1:45 PM

    Lovely!!
    Reply
    MargaretMarch 21, 2023 at 11:13 PM

    Sweet!
    Reply
    AnonymousMarch 23, 2023 at 1:12 AM

    Lovely memories ...dinghies with an outboard much more fun than a sail boat.,,,Rall
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    purplepeninportland.comMarch 23, 2023 at 11:33 AM

    Nice, sharing memories with someone who feels the same way.
    Reply

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